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What Does a Kiss Feel Like? by thecrazyavatarcritic, literature

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What Does a Kiss Feel Like?

Ruby and Penny sat on a bench in one of Beacon Academy’s courtyards. Ruby drank from her cup of water while Penny people-watched. Penny noticed a few students who appeared to be couples. They hugged and laughed and held hands. And kissed. Penny wasn’t a stranger to the concept of relationships, but she didn’t feel like she fully understood it. “Ruby,” asked Penny. “What does a kiss feel like?” Ruby tried not to spit out her drink. “W-Where did that come from?” “I just noticed that some people seem to do it a lot, so I’m wondering what it feels like.” Ruby blushed as

Ritsu Akiyama by thecrazyavatarcritic, literature

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Ritsu Akiyama

Mio could never tell what was on her girlfriend’s mind. With the all of the ideas the energetic drummer ever came up with, it was hard for anyone to tell. Whatever the case, Ritsu was staring out into space when she was supposed to be studying. “Ritsu?” Mio called, trying to get her girlfriend’s attention. Ritsu wasn’t fazed. ‘What on Earth is she thinking about?’ Mio thought. “Ritsu!” she called again, this time getting an odd response. “Ritsu Akiyama…” The drummer wondered aloud, her head resting in her hands. Mio was taken aback at what was just said. Part of it

Waiting Out the Storm by thecrazyavatarcritic, literature

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Waiting Out the Storm

Thick, heavy clouds hung over Beacon Academy. The rain came down harsh and unrelenting. Lightning flashed all across the sky, and the thunder was loud, ever so loud. It was the middle of the night, well after lights outs, but no one was sleeping. No one could sleep. Instead, most occupants decided to watch the storm from the safety of their rooms. One such room was home to four female students who were altogether known as Team RWBY. Ruby and her sister Yang sat by the windows. Where they grew up, lightning storms were a rare occasion, so they’ve always been mystified by their terrifying beauty. Next to Yang sat Blake, reading a book b

Good Morning, Love (Part 2) by thecrazyavatarcritic, literature

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Good Morning, Love (Part 2)

Lili stood at her front door, a look of uncertainty on her face and her hand clutched tightly around Natalya’s. She promised her girlfriend and herself that she would tell Vash about their relationship. A whirlwind of scattered thoughts and emotions frenzied in Lili’s mind: Her dread if Vash rejected her and her guilt for not telling him sooner. In her mind, every conceivable negative outcome played out like film. “Are you sure you’re ready?” Natalya asked. Lili eased. Natalya’s voice had that effect on her. “Yes.” she replied. She turned the knob with her free hand, opened the door, and ente

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What Does a Kiss Feel Like? by thecrazyavatarcritic, literature

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What Does a Kiss Feel Like?

Ritsu Akiyama by thecrazyavatarcritic, literature

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Ritsu Akiyama

Waiting Out the Storm by thecrazyavatarcritic, literature

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Waiting Out the Storm

Are You Going to Tell Her? by thecrazyavatarcritic, literature

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Are You Going to Tell Her?

There were a few minutes left of class, and we had just finished our work. Shizune seemed kind of annoyed. She always got like that whenever we didn’t finish early. Classwork was so easy for her, she turned it into a game; ‘How Fast Can We Get Stuff Done?’. But since Hisao and I weren’t as stellar as she was, we always slowed her down. Hisao signed an apology to her; he’d been picking up the sign language pretty quickly. [It’s okay,] she signed, [I’m used to you being such a slow poke.] I smiled. I’ve always admired Shizune’s bluntness. Actually, I’ve always admired everything about

Insomnia by thecrazyavatarcritic, literature

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Insomnia

He couldn’t sleep. No matter how much he tried, he couldn’t ease his troubled mind enough to throw himself into a dreamless stupor. Thoughts of her rattled through his head. How her skin felt against his hands. How the taste of her kisses made him crave for more. How he missed showering her with affection. How he longed for his return to his homestead, for he knew that she would’ve been waiting. Would’ve. No longer. Sadder thoughts arise. Almost morose. How she broke it off a quarter of the way through his worldly trek. How she managed to find a new love and happiness within mere days after the ending. How even as mor

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Artist // Hobbyist // Literature

July 25, 1993
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Deviant for 17 years
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I'm on Deviantart to appreciate the work of really talented artists and writers, especially if the work is related to my favorites shows. I may occasionally post fanfics.

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Anime/Manga

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Nausicaä of the Valley of the Wind

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Soul Eater, My Hero Academia, She-Ra, The Dragon Prince

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Adam Young, Andrew McMahon, Dragonforce, The OverUnder, Bleachers

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Neverending Story, Strawberry Panic

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Kurt Vonnegut

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Kirby Super Star, Super Mario Galaxy

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thecrazyavatarcritic

Oct 17, 2014

Neato. Yet another site I can do this kinda stuff on that isn't Facebook.

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thecrazyavatarcritic

Apr 23, 2014

SakuraCon 2014

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I might as well write some about SakuraCon while my vlog exports :P. So I drove myself and three others (my girlfriend, who I met last year at SakuraCon, and her friends) to Seattle for the Con. Lots of fun was had. Saturday was our cosplay day, so my girlfriend and I went as Carlos and Cecil from Welcome to Night Vale. We got some pics taken of us. I got autographs from Leah Clark, Chuck Huber, and Todd Haberkorn. And I met Daniel Sulzbach (known by the Youtube handle 'MrRepzion'), who was walking around in his Deadpool cosplay (with a Pikachu hat; that's how you know it's him). The best thing (aside from the autographs and the time spen

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Mar 22, 2014

Having Some Original Ideas

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And I'm not sure what to do with them. I've opened a few documents and kind of wrote up a few ideas about the main thing, and then tried to begin writing the thing, hoping that it would help to develop the characters in my head. Not much luck there. I wonder if I would have an easier time with this if I have them start off as RWBY OCs, since they're a group of four. Two of the characters are a lot more developed then the other two. I'm not sure what to do with that. The first two have some sort of trait (more like a 'gimmick', sadly) that distinguishes them. The other two, not so much, unless it has something to do with one of the first two